Tribute To the Rain

Tribute to the Rains 

And then it finally came
What was very much sought
And what was most needed 
As people even prayed for

Eventually, the rains did arrive
Coming as it did in a flurry
Consuming with it all anxiety,
Uncertainty, the heat and dust 

In whatever shape it did land
As speedy drizzle or brazen shower; 
Noisy downpour continued all nights,
With lightning and thunder 

Hurtling down came the stormy rain 
With gale and gusty winds, splashing,
Causing muddy pools and rolling floods; 
Hurriedly filling up lakes and reservoirs

Wishes grew, for it to be regular  
Each year and round the year; enough,
For that alone would mean, growth
And bring in, wealth and happiness

And thus it raised the hopes of farmers
From communities far and wide; who,
Ever so expectant gazed at the sky:
For rains alone made their crops thrive

For Flora and Fauna to bloom manifold
As pastures and fields spring back to life 
Plants and trees turning to refreshing green
As marshy lands all get wet and soaked 

At long last the Rain Gods had scampered in
Bringing with it promises of plenty and cheer;
Making the air clean and pollutants free
And ushering in climate for a comfort spree

Children rushed to get drenched for fun 
While others chose to cuddle in the bed 
A delight that's been quite forgotten 
For rains brought thrill to all age brethren 

It often inspired families to stick together 
And munch crispy snacks chattering together; 
With a myriad of thoughts and dreams 
And alas life for man got all set to zoom!

It didn't really matter how rains showed up
Through a 'cyclone' or a ‘depression’
All it did was to arrive in style and substance; 
To the stupendous amazement of all asunder 

Whether in torrents or in spate
Raindrops did charge the water bodies
Making insects and worms come alive 
For birds to flutter and butterflies to swarm 

The wonder of this refreshing shower 
Instantly thrilled my heart with heavenly beat, 
And thoughts pleasantly ebbed in my mind
To string words together and sing in praise

Great God indeed; did this resource, bless,
For bereft of it; all life shall be a thing of past  
And with it the journey of all living things 
May well see the light of millenniums ahead!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/9/2015 3:24:00 AM
This is a very inspirational poem on rain. I enjoyed reading while capturing the essence of your poem written in an excellent way. Keep on writing! Thank you for sharing, Mothiram.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:11:00 PM
Mothiram, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/27/2015 10:46:00 AM
Hi Mothiram, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/29/2015 10:52:00 PM
My friend you are a very talented poet as I can see reflected in your work!
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Mothiram Pushpala
Date: 11/28/2015 2:55:00 AM
Thank you very much Ms Pandita. I am glad to note that I could get a good score on my first posting. It reinforces my thought that I can write poems reasonably well and will spur me to write more of them in the coming days and months. Thanks once again for welcoming me.
Date: 11/27/2015 9:04:00 AM
Wonderful tribute,, Mothiram, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Mothiram Pushpala
Date: 11/28/2015 2:39:00 AM
Hello Ms Skat It's a pleasure to know you through Poetry Soup. It's just by accident I browsed Poetry Soup today. I wrote a poem on Rains; being inspired by the recent monsoon in Chennai. I am 63 and a postgraduate in Sociology and Management. At University I had been a debater, speaker and dramatist. I have written several articles and have interest for literature and poetry. Presently I am the Editor of Lions Touch. I worked in Corporates for over 30 years. I set up my company a decade ago. I have traveled globally.
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Mothiram Pushpala
Date: 11/27/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. Your comment is very encouraging.
Date: 11/27/2015 7:32:00 AM
Great work praising rain which we take for granted sometimes that is when we are getting an abundance..There shall be showers of blessings all over the earth if only we ask..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Mothiram Pushpala
Date: 11/28/2015 2:51:00 AM
In my part of the world when rains fail, we are subject to lot of difficulties as our city depends very much on the two seasonal rainfalls. The population of Chennai has increased from 400,000 in 1984 to about 8,000,000 as of date due to rapid urbanization, growing businesses, expansion of city limit and migration of folks to city from rural areas.
Date: 11/27/2015 7:25:00 AM
Amazing. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:52:00 AM
Thank you.
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