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Susan Boulet was an artist 1941-1997 Her paintings are famous for their layered effects which she started later on in her artistic career. She loved fantasy which is easily seen in her paintings. This is my fantasy poem as I look at this beautiful picture painted by Susan Boulet. The old man sits quietly on the hillside, knowing his days as one Spirit would soon be coming to an end. He stares blankly at the heavens where the pale blue sky is the backsplash for Cumulus clouds now filling in, the horizon. He chants his prayer over and over again calling his brothers to come receive his spirit and be one with him for all eternity. Brother bear, cloak me with the warmth of your coat that we may walk through each winter and never be cold again. We will stand together as one, never again will we know fear. Brother wolf fill my heart with your loyal spirit that we may rise to heights of a love greater than any human could possibly achieve. His prayer seems to rise more intensely as he continues. Mighty cat, share with me your speed that we may be faster than the wind, jumping through the clouds as one. Wise and good owl, become one with us that we shall have wings to fly as eagles and wisdom to find eternal peace. Now the old man whispers, together we shall hold the secrets of the universe in our hands. Soon his chin drops down on his chest as a smile crosses his face, and the old frail body crumbles to the hard rocky ground. Then the cry of a wolf, the hoot of an owl and simultaneously the roars of a sabre-toothed and bear echo through the valley. As darkness fills the sky and the moon is high, the silhouette of a young warrior stands proudly on the bluff. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 10.26.2014 For Debbie Guzzi’s Contest: Free Verse, Prose Poetry, Haibun

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Date: 11/11/2014 8:09:00 AM
A truly just tribute to the Native Americans that lived here thousands of years before white eyes ever showed up. Fantastic visuals your write brought forth in my mind. Bravo and a solid, super 7 from me my friend.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert. I had a feeling you would like this.
Date: 11/8/2014 4:14:00 PM
Yes he is spirit walking to the Creator! Nice one Brenda Congrad's Light & Love
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:21:00 PM
Thanks Debbie.
Date: 11/8/2014 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Brenda! Your take on this poem is unique! The portrayal of the old man and his relationship with animals is excellent. The final line...awesome! // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/8/2014 8:54:00 AM
I like your art Brenda and I am seriously looking Forward to reading from your books. Congrats on your worthy win. Hugs.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:23:00 PM
Wow, thanks Kayod5
Date: 11/7/2014 6:54:00 PM
great haibun Brenda.. :) I have never tried this poetry type.. :) love the story.. :)! kudos!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Olive
Date: 11/7/2014 4:04:00 PM
Hi Brenda. Great story. I loved the characterization of the old man merging with nature and earth, crumbing into the hard rocky ground. Very compelling tale all around. Congratulations on your win. Best regards, Earl
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/8/2014 9:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Earl.
Date: 11/7/2014 3:13:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing win, Brenda! I love the picture and the spiritual tale you weaved! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/7/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Rhonda.
Date: 11/6/2014 8:37:00 PM
Excellent write Brenda...Congrats on your win..
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/7/2014 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 11/6/2014 5:19:00 PM
I don't know why I could not write anything for this challenge. I started four different versions but nothing that turned my crank. I guess I wanted to write something that would impress Debbie. As I kept reading other entries I realized I just did not have anything unique to offer. Your write is gorgeous and unique and I love the painting you chose. Congratulations on your win with this fabulous write.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/7/2014 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Maurice. Sometimes we are just not inspired to write about something. I find if I'm not inspired the poem is not that great. You can tell which poets were inspired when you read their poems.
Date: 11/6/2014 3:47:00 PM
Brenda, how wonderfully you have expressed the visions and meaning you found in the Boulet painting. Your words so viviidly painted a picture of what your eyes saw. My congratulations on your win! One of my Fav's for sure. Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/6/2014 4:26:00 PM
Ah, thanks so much Sandra.
Date: 11/6/2014 3:17:00 PM
Dear Brenda, Your poem is as awesome as the Boulet picture! I love the way you describe the animals and the Native American. They always revered nature, just as many poets do. Congratulations, dear! Love, carolyn
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/6/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thanks so much for your complement Carolyn.
Date: 11/6/2014 12:43:00 PM
WOW! awesome picture amazing poem another fine win for you Brenda many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/6/2014 1:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan. XOXO
Date: 11/3/2014 3:42:00 PM
Grand tale that you have conspired from the painting..Way to go ..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/3/2014 4:30:00 PM
Thank you Sara. It's always a joy to read your poetry.
Date: 10/29/2014 3:37:00 PM
Excellent...I had to favorite this one.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/29/2014 4:22:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/28/2014 2:59:00 AM
Excellent attack at this challenge Brenda. I love what you did.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/28/2014 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Maurice. I'm glad you like this.
Date: 10/27/2014 10:37:00 PM
Beautiful piece of art that you chose and the a well written poem to portray the painting, another beautiful piece Brenda such talent. love and hugs :) eve
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/28/2014 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve.
Date: 10/27/2014 10:29:00 PM
Wonderful paintings shez known for n a great tribute u penned here Brenda! gl in contest!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/28/2014 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Sharma.
Date: 10/27/2014 12:50:00 PM
I was sucked in from the first line...A winner and a masterpiece. Please Soup Mail me and tell me more about this poet and while you're at it, tell me more about yourself too...
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/27/2014 2:43:00 PM
Thanks Tim. I glad you liked it.

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