She was simply... the best! ...
Demure in her pose, modest in her ways Deflecting potential beaus, careful not to stray Brief in conversation, shunning repartee Halting in her laughter, her faint smile shadowy Eyes fixed on the ground, hair pulled tautly back Lips pursed tight together, her figure corset-wracked Yet deep within dwelt beauty, of a type so rarely seen Her eternity of timeless verse, visionary... and pristine
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