Jenish Somadas Poet Rhyme

Trial and the Judgement

Thrashed her life in that vicious fuscous night
Tattered her body in that mucky verdant site
Shattered her dreams in that bloody wicked plight-
Four feigned “civilized” beasts enjoyed their bite. 

They waited their turn to deracinate her
With ears and hearts fastened against her prayer.
In ineffable agony, nature tried to cover
Her broken form with a leafy, gentle shower.

When tired they spared her for a midget time
And wrapped in a blanket to set a meacock crime
Soaked her in fuel, then burned her as their scheme—
And disenthralled the soul of the decubitus dame.

Now tell me the judgement of these cruel critters
Hang or guillotine — let justice find its splitters.
Lynching or castration — the punishment we impose,
Sharpen your quills — let the verdict close.

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Eric Cohen March 1, 2020 at 9:14 PM Very powerfully penned. Peace to you. Jenish Somadas March 1, 2020 at 11:13 PM Thank you Eric for finding this.. Your support I value..

Krish Radhakrishna February 10, 2020 at 3:13 PM Nice poem. I can see the context! I feel castration followed by hanging. That is my judgement! Jenish Somadas February 10, 2020 at 9:20 PM Castration and hanging..yeah..If law is strong, definitely there will be a drop of crimes..Thanks for your time and comment..

Pratap Roy January 3, 2020 at 12:27 AM Very well written, Jenish. Message well penned. God bless you. Jenish Somadas January 3, 2020 at 12:41 AM Thank you Pratap..

Gershon Wolf January 1, 2020 at 7:53 PM Powerful write, Jenish. The message needs to be pounded home, and this certainly pounds it hard. Bravo, Gershon Jenish Somadas January 1, 2020 at 9:19 PM Cruelty towards women should be stopped.. If not, at least the culprits need to be punished..

Brenda Chiri December 31, 2019 at 11:01 AM Congrats on your HM! Happy new year my friend!;) Jenish Somadas December 31, 2019 at 1:01 PM Thank you..Happy New Year..

John Hamilton December 31, 2019 at 8:14 AM Just one more thought, I wrote a song about violence to women, maybe you will like it, it's called When she dreams. Thank you! Jenish Somadas December 31, 2019 at 9:29 AM I will sure read.. Thanks..

John Hamilton December 31, 2019 at 8:12 AM This is one more evidence that too many things in this world go unpunished. They do deserve to be judged by the Almighty, rest assured he sees all, and all will get their righteous judgement! So sad you need to keep writing about it Jenish, but well said, well written!Powerful pen! Jenish Somadas December 31, 2019 at 9:28 AM Thank you John for your kind comments..Sad, it is happening on and on in every countries..

Heidi Sands December 13, 2019 at 6:33 AM Wow. This is so powerful. I can feel it. It hits home with some awful things I have seen in this life. These things bring so many questions and you have expressed it well :) Jenish Somadas December 13, 2019 at 6:54 AM Unfortunate things are happening around and the emotions overflowed ..Thank you..

Jon Gutmacher December 12, 2019 at 10:35 PM I wasn't really sure about this until I began to cry because the power of the poem overwhelmed me. Jenish Somadas December 13, 2019 at 1:14 AM I'm honoured..I could convey the emotions..Thank you..

Sandra Adams December 8, 2019 at 5:47 PM this is deep, powerful and full of emotions...wow....amazing write.... Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 9:04 PM Thank you Sandra..

Gershon Wolf December 8, 2019 at 1:04 PM Rather amazing, Jenish. I need to find a dictionary quick! :) gw Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 9:04 PM Thank you Gershon.. Strong emotions need strong words to carry..

Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2019 at 6:44 AM Wow! That pen of yours went to work! Nicely done, Jenish! Jenish Somadas December 8, 2019 at 9:21 AM Thank you Kim..

Ann Foster December 7, 2019 at 8:31 PM I had the best lines and response, then my computer dumped me out... (soft crying)... I had to restart...darn...I will try again. Poem: Loved it, made me angry and made me love it again. Powerful write... and my pen is ready. I want to rise to the occasion to find new ways to dispose of the cads, that they may know personally, how potatoes are grown, and how long it takes for things buried... to dig their way out, or not?. ... dipping quill for more ink... hehe... Ann Jenish Somadas December 7, 2019 at 10:39 PM Thank you Ann for you visit and comment.. Sorry, my poem destroyed your computer also... lol...

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 7, 2019 at 8:58 AM Absolutely powerful poetry, Jenish! It pulsates w/passion. And resonates w/moral discretion. A very effective poetic one-two punch to the soular plexus. Magnificent poem! The quill judgment belongs to God Almighty, who judges all things in pure righteousness. Love and more love always. Jenish Somadas December 7, 2019 at 10:37 PM I was quite emotional while hearing the news.. But your comment is an eye opener..##The quill judgment belongs to God Almighty, who judges all things in pure righteousness.## Thanks for the insight.. Your comment is so so valuable..

Juliet Ligon December 5, 2019 at 10:06 AM Such a heartbreaking thing. Your pen spills your passion of judgement for this horrible act. Castrate them, also any of the above mentions. In the end God will judge in righteousness. Jenish Somadas December 7, 2019 at 10:32 PM It is really heartbreaking.. Thanks for your comment Juliet..

Eve Roper December 5, 2019 at 8:37 AM Wow, very deep and emotional verse with great imagery, Jenish, love it. Jenish Somadas December 7, 2019 at 10:32 PM Thank you Eve..

Vijay Pandit December 5, 2019 at 7:00 AM This is very intense Jenish--every word so carefully chosen to describe the crime--your poem makes an impact--everything you propose in the final stanza is fair game. Excellent write, Jenish. Jenish Somadas December 5, 2019 at 7:08 AM Thank you Vijay.. You know the incident and the emotion behind it.. It is sad to write again and again...