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Trial and the Judgement

Thrashed her life in that vicious fuscous night Tattered her body in that mucky verdant site Shattered her dreams in that bloody wicked plight Four feigned civilized animals, enjoyed their bite. They waited their turn to deracinate her With ears and heart kept fastened for her prayer With ineffable agony nature tried to cover Her natural body with leafy little shower. When tired they spared her for a midget time And wrapped in a blanket to set a meacock crime Wetted in fuel they fired the chad as a scheme And disenthralled the soul of the decubitus dame. Now tell me the judgement of these cruel critters Hang or guillotine their ugly little heads Lynching or castration, anything you can propose Sharpen your quills and the judgement of the case. Honorable Mention in STRAND SPECIAL 12 ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Eric Cohen

Date: 3/1/2020 9:14:00 PM

Very powerfully penned. Peace to you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/1/2020 11:13:00 PM

Thank you Eric for finding this.. Your support I value..

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/10/2020 3:13:00 PM

Nice poem. I can see the context! I feel castration followed by hanging. That is my judgement!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/10/2020 9:20:00 PM

Castration and hanging..yeah..If law is strong, definitely there will be a drop of crimes..Thanks for your time and comment..

Pratap Roy

Date: 1/3/2020 12:27:00 AM

Very well written, Jenish. Message well penned. God bless you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/3/2020 12:41:00 AM

Thank you Pratap..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/1/2020 7:53:00 PM

Powerful write, Jenish. The message needs to be pounded home, and this certainly pounds it hard. Bravo, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/1/2020 9:19:00 PM

Cruelty towards women should be stopped.. If not, at least the culprits need to be punished..

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/31/2019 11:01:00 AM

Congrats on your HM! Happy new year my friend!;)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/31/2019 1:01:00 PM

Thank you..Happy New Year..

John Hamilton

Date: 12/31/2019 8:14:00 AM

Just one more thought, I wrote a song about violence to women, maybe you will like it, it's called When she dreams. Thank you!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/31/2019 9:29:00 AM

I will sure read.. Thanks..

John Hamilton

Date: 12/31/2019 8:12:00 AM

This is one more evidence that too many things in this world go unpunished. They do deserve to be judged by the Almighty, rest assured he sees all, and all will get their righteous judgement! So sad you need to keep writing about it Jenish, but well said, well written!Powerful pen!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/31/2019 9:28:00 AM

Thank you John for your kind comments..Sad, it is happening on and on in every countries..

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/13/2019 6:33:00 AM

Wow. This is so powerful. I can feel it. It hits home with some awful things I have seen in this life. These things bring so many questions and you have expressed it well :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/13/2019 6:54:00 AM

Unfortunate things are happening around and the emotions overflowed ..Thank you..

Jon Gutmacher

Date: 12/12/2019 10:35:00 PM

I wasn't really sure about this until I began to cry because the power of the poem overwhelmed me.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/13/2019 1:14:00 AM

I'm honoured..I could convey the emotions..Thank you..

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/8/2019 5:47:00 PM

this is deep, powerful and full of emotions...wow....amazing write....

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 9:04:00 PM

Thank you Sandra..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/8/2019 1:04:00 PM

Rather amazing, Jenish. I need to find a dictionary quick! :) gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 9:04:00 PM

Thank you Gershon.. Strong emotions need strong words to carry..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2019 6:44:00 AM

Wow! That pen of yours went to work! Nicely done, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you Kim..

Ann Foster

Date: 12/7/2019 8:31:00 PM

I had the best lines and response, then my computer dumped me out... (soft crying)... I had to restart...darn...I will try again. Poem: Loved it, made me angry and made me love it again. Powerful write... and my pen is ready. I want to rise to the occasion to find new ways to dispose of the cads, that they may know personally, how potatoes are grown, and how long it takes for things buried... to dig their way out, or not?. ... dipping quill for more ink... hehe... Ann

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/7/2019 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Ann for you visit and comment.. Sorry, my poem destroyed your computer also... lol...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/7/2019 8:58:00 AM

Absolutely powerful poetry, Jenish! It pulsates w/passion. And resonates w/moral discretion. A very effective poetic one-two punch to the soular plexus. Magnificent poem! The quill judgment belongs to God Almighty, who judges all things in pure righteousness. Love and more love always.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/7/2019 10:37:00 PM

I was quite emotional while hearing the news.. But your comment is an eye opener..##The quill judgment belongs to God Almighty, who judges all things in pure righteousness.## Thanks for the insight.. Your comment is so so valuable..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/5/2019 10:06:00 AM

Such a heartbreaking thing. Your pen spills your passion of judgement for this horrible act. Castrate them, also any of the above mentions. In the end God will judge in righteousness.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/7/2019 10:32:00 PM

It is really heartbreaking.. Thanks for your comment Juliet..

Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2019 8:37:00 AM

Wow, very deep and emotional verse with great imagery, Jenish, love it.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/7/2019 10:32:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/5/2019 7:00:00 AM

This is very intense Jenish--every word so carefully chosen to describe the crime--your poem makes an impact--everything you propose in the final stanza is fair game. Excellent write, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/5/2019 7:08:00 AM

Thank you Vijay.. You know the incident and the emotion behind it.. It is sad to write again and again...