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TRIADE 1 Old Young Man

The old young man has had a dream 
Of how he had traveled far.
I wouldn't say he was in the past 
When he found himself in place.

Was that afar as far as the far 
If the life had shown him more,
As well as far and afar from far 
And the Cuban Missile Crisis was also interesting to read about.

Dreamy place of the local space 
Told him to carve in stone 
So he took the chisel and setting the easel
Had immortalized weasel in stone.

The weasel was thrilled and the spirit distilled 
Had woken the memory far 
And it turned out that way that we never forget 
That we made in life so afar.

Was a weasel in stone lived to see years ahead 
When people went mad for the youth.
In the middle of desert there is small hut, 
there he lives with the stars. 

Once a pilot arrived ceasing the visible 
But the young boy remained living forever.

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Date: 8/1/2025 2:05:00 PM
Interesting to say the very least. Onward to part two! :) john
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