Triad In Seven Beats

Triad in 7 beats





Tears as serene morning dew
Hang onto subtle thought strings,
Lavalliere decors my soul.




Written Feb 22nd, 2017
For contest "triad in 7 beats"
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Poteet Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 7:28 PM
I really like the imagery her, your use of decors as a verb is clear and decisive. Like the form too, triad in 7 beats. An enjoyable read, Dr. Upma.
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February 22, 2017 at 7:26 AM
Really nicely crafted and quite enchanting. Beautifully done. Good luck.
Daniel Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Beautiful, Dr. Upma:)
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