Mark Martin Poet Verse

Triad In 7 Beats - Spiderweb

Spider silk, spun snare of steel
Morning's moisture, spheres reveal
Deathly wonder, deadly wheel



Written 21st February 2017

Entry to "triad in seven beats" contest

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Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2017 at 6:50 PM oh yes, a deadly wheel. What a great line you put at the end, Mark. Congrats on your win. Mark Martin February 26, 2017 at 11:58 PM Thanks Andrea! All the best! Mark :-)

Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 4:08 PM Dropping back with my congrats Mark:-) hugs Jan xx Mark Martin February 26, 2017 at 4:10 PM Thanks again Jan! All the best! Mark :-)

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2017 at 11:23 AM mark, a sheer flow of edgy images makes this verse a winner.. thanks for joining and more congrats..huggs Mark Martin February 26, 2017 at 11:41 AM Thanks Nette for the feedback and for running the contest. All the best! Mark :-)

Joanna Daniel February 24, 2017 at 3:34 AM I like your "snare of steel" and that last line, Mark:) all the best:) Mark Martin February 24, 2017 at 3:05 PM Thanks Jo! :-)

Eve Roper February 23, 2017 at 5:03 PM Very good, :-) thank you for reading my poem . hugs Eve Mark Martin February 23, 2017 at 11:16 PM Thanks Eve! :-)

Laura Leiser February 22, 2017 at 1:37 PM Such a unique take on the theme..I liked he it. :) Mark Martin February 23, 2017 at 11:14 PM Thanks Laura! :-)

Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2017 at 8:36 PM Love your triumph of words! Mark Martin February 21, 2017 at 11:55 PM Thanks Kim! :-)

Lyva Marty February 21, 2017 at 3:23 PM Extraordinary interpretation! One of my favs; quite dark it is. " Surreal" has 3 syllable methinks, making Line 2 an 8 -syllable count.Think so? Win it! Mark Martin February 21, 2017 at 4:01 PM Changed to "reveal" - just in case. Thanks! :-) Mark Martin February 21, 2017 at 3:28 PM Thanks Lyva! Did wonder about the number of syllables in surreal - did some research - some say two - some say three. I think it depends how you pronounce it. Strangely enough, the word "ideal" has the same problem.

Agnes Krampe February 21, 2017 at 2:17 PM Oh, I love your take on the theme. Deathly indeed. Good luck in the contest, Mark. Mark Martin February 21, 2017 at 2:21 PM Thanks Agnes! :-)

Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 1:15 PM I love where you went with this. Great concept for the graphic supplied. Mark Martin February 21, 2017 at 1:17 PM Thanks Chris! :-)

Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 1:01 PM Especially love that final line Mark - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Mark Martin February 21, 2017 at 1:04 PM Thanks Jan! Part of nature's "tooth and claw" :-)