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Triad In 7 Beats - Natural Gems

Crystal chandeliers adorn
spider’s webs at break of dawn -
see them scintillate each morn!

Triad in 7 beats Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud

Checked with how many syllables

02~21~17

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Mark Martin March 12, 2017 at 4:33 PM Scintillate is such a great word for a poem! Congratulations on your win Jan! :-)

Charlotte Puddifoot February 28, 2017 at 8:09 AM love those crystal chandeliers, jan :) congrats on your excellent placement in nette's contest...you know i always say these short forms are your strength - i still recall your daffodil haiku that placed 1st with me! Jan Allison March 1, 2017 at 1:10 PM Charlotte you boost my spirits and my self confidence so much:-) thank you for all your support I do appreciate your lovely comments:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green February 27, 2017 at 2:15 PM Congrats on your placement Jan. I knew using chandeliers would get one of the top spots. Very good my friend. Jan Allison February 27, 2017 at 2:23 PM Thanks Chris I am delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper February 26, 2017 at 10:09 PM beautiful :) Jan Allison February 27, 2017 at 2:23 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2017 at 6:39 PM AWESOME win, Jan, and deserved!! Congrats Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 6:44 PM Thanks Andrea I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Grant Norwood February 26, 2017 at 4:22 PM Fantastic imagery. Love it. Well done Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 4:29 PM Thanks Grant I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe February 26, 2017 at 2:29 PM Congrats on your win, Jan. Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 3:13 PM Thanks so much Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi February 26, 2017 at 11:20 AM This is wonderful, Jan. It really captures the mood of the picture. Congratulations. Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 11:24 AM Many thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2017 at 10:05 AM jan, love the word play and content... i like the use of 'chandeliers..' sweet congrats on your high rank and thanks for joining.. huggs Jan Allison February 26, 2017 at 11:23 AM WOW thanks for my 2nd Place Nette I am delighted you liked my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 25, 2017 at 2:51 PM Beautiful, Jan! Best of luck...hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison February 25, 2017 at 4:00 PM Thanks Rhonda I think Nette will have a tough contest to judge I have seen some lovely poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne February 24, 2017 at 5:02 PM Oh wow really gorgeous. This is definitely a gem. Excellent...a fav. Jan Allison February 24, 2017 at 5:19 PM Thanks Armand I hope Nette likes it:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen February 22, 2017 at 12:44 PM - Beautifully written, Jan - This became a "hot" contest .... suddenly closed ... completely :) - Many a beautiful suggestion .... it will be difficult to judge, I believe - Good luck, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison February 22, 2017 at 5:31 PM I saw such lovely poems Anne Lise I think Nette will have a hard time judging:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May February 22, 2017 at 6:28 AM Lovely write Jan... I like the chandeliers Jan Allison February 22, 2017 at 12:24 PM Me too Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel February 22, 2017 at 6:23 AM Wow, Jan! This is amazing! I never even knew of the contest, a 7:) Jan Allison February 22, 2017 at 12:25 PM Give it a go Jo but it is filling quickly:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin February 22, 2017 at 4:41 AM These entries are so varied. I think they speak to our individual uniqueness. I've read many tonight and a handful were absolute beauty in their impact. I have placed yousr in my hand of handfuls. Special, Jan ... CayCay Jan Allison February 22, 2017 at 4:45 AM Aww thanks CayCay I have seen some awesome entries Nette will have a tough job judging this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser February 21, 2017 at 9:18 PM Very pretty imagery...I like the idea of chandeliers! Jan Allison February 22, 2017 at 5:04 AM Thanks Laura the webs are very beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie February 21, 2017 at 9:08 PM Just lovely Jan :-) Triad is new to me, but I know I love the pretty imagery of your words. Don't care for spiders but their webs are so intricate, quite amazing Terrific writing :-) My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn Jan Allison February 22, 2017 at 5:05 AM I agree with you Lynn the webs are stunning but i don't like ////00\\\\ my son called them 'doiders' when he was little and we still use that word lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2017 at 8:33 PM Love this, Jan! Jan Allison February 22, 2017 at 5:06 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner February 21, 2017 at 5:32 PM I have no idea what a triad is but I love the imagery in this poem, Jan:) Good luck! Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 5:43 PM Nor me Daniel but I loved the pic Nette found for us, I've seen some lovely contest entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer February 21, 2017 at 4:31 PM wow, you have nailed this one, jan! perfect! Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 4:33 PM Thanks Ilene I think Nette will have a hard time judging this one I have seen some wonderful entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings February 21, 2017 at 4:17 PM Excellent, Jan. Crystal chandeliers is just right. Good luck in the contest. // Barry Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 4:19 PM Thanks Barry:-) I don't like spiders but their webs are so beautiful with the dew clinging to it:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2017 at 3:41 PM GREAT one, Jan. I can see this contest will fill up VERY fast!!! And now i am off here. See ya later from my home! Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 3:47 PM Thanks Andrea hope you have time to write one before the contest fills:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith February 21, 2017 at 3:11 PM This is lovely Jan Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 3:18 PM Thanks Tim I hope Nette likes it I've seen some stunning poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 21, 2017 at 2:37 PM Gorgeous! 7 :) xomo Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 3:07 PM Thanks Maureen:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 2:30 PM Oh Yeah, Jan, "Chandeliers" loved that and the entire poem. Wow... Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 3:07 PM Thanks Chris I hope Nette likes it - i have seen some wonderful entries:-) hugs Jan xx

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