Triad In 7 Beats

Strings of nighttime’s crystal roll
Where  pen and ink  drain  mashed  scroll
Till  bubbles pop—-lines console!



Triad In 7 Beats
Contest: Nette Onclaud  Feb 22/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on your win Juaneco! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 7:07 PM
BIG congrats to you in the contest winner list.
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 4:20 PM
loved the imagery Juaneco congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 2:36 PM
congrats on your placement, juaneco.
Onclaud Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:47 AM
this makes it on the winning list for its very intriguing view of night as crystal and inspires 'bubbles' of imagination to pop.. sweet congrats and thanks for joining.. hope to read more from you, juaneco..huggs
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