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Triad In 7 Beats

Mourning Dew Window soaked in murky dew Trickles of death's ache —so blue Reflecting your face, anew. 22 Feb 2017 Triad In 7 Beats: nette onclaud Contest

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Date: 3/12/2017 4:18:00 PM
Felt the pain in the second line. Congratulations on your win Gabby! :-)
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Date: 2/26/2017 6:47:00 PM
This one is unique. I love the original thought. Congrats for your win, Gabby
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Date: 2/26/2017 4:05:00 PM
such a sad take on the image many congrats Gabby:-)hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2017 2:32:00 PM
Congrats, Gabby.
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Date: 2/26/2017 11:15:00 AM
ohh, you created a different kind of dew that is figuratively sullen and amazing, gabby... big congrats on your high spot and thanks for participating..huggs
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Date: 2/22/2017 7:28:00 AM
Deep and sadly beautiful, Gabby:) I see a winner here:) a 7:)
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