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Triad In 7 Beats

Mourning Dew



Window soaked in murky dew

Trickles of death's ache —so blue

Reflecting your face, anew.



22 Feb 2017
Triad In 7 Beats: nette onclaud Contest

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Mark Martin

March 12, 2017 at 4:18 PM

Felt the pain in the second line. Congratulations on your win Gabby! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2017 at 6:47 PM

This one is unique. I love the original thought. Congrats for your win, Gabby

Jan Allison

February 26, 2017 at 4:05 PM

such a sad take on the image many congrats Gabby:-)hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 2:32 PM

Congrats, Gabby.

Nette Onclaud

February 26, 2017 at 11:15 AM

ohh, you created a different kind of dew that is figuratively sullen and amazing, gabby... big congrats on your high spot and thanks for participating..huggs