Home » Poems » Joseph May » Triad In 7 Beats

Triad In 7 Beats

Diamond sequins lure his threads Silken lies, the web he spreads Breaks her heart, a tear she sheds .. 2/21/17 Contest: Nette's Triad in 7 Beats

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Date: 2/25/2017 2:43:00 PM

Wow, I love where the picture took you, Joseph...very emotive write! Hugs,Rhonda

Joseph May
Date: 2/25/2017 7:16:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda

Date: 2/22/2017 6:52:00 AM

This is deep and definitely a winner, Joseph:)

Joseph May
Date: 2/25/2017 7:16:00 PM

Thank you Jo

Date: 2/21/2017 8:37:00 PM

Great one, Joseph!

Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2017 9:59:00 PM

Thank you Kim

Date: 2/21/2017 2:48:00 PM

What a beautifully sad take on the contest photo. Really nicely done.

Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2017 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Chris

Date: 2/21/2017 12:34:00 PM

You captured the image beautifully Jospeh I have just seen the contest pic - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2017 12:35:00 PM

Thank you Jan...best wishes on yours