Joseph May Poet Verse

Triad In 7 Beats

Diamond sequins lure his threads
   Silken lies, the web he spreads 
  Breaks her heart, a tear she sheds
                          ..
 2/21/17
 Contest:  Nette's Triad in 7 Beats

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 25, 2017 at 2:43 PM Wow, I love where the picture took you, Joseph...very emotive write! Hugs,Rhonda Joseph May February 25, 2017 at 7:16 PM Thank you Rhonda

Joanna Daniel February 22, 2017 at 6:52 AM This is deep and definitely a winner, Joseph:) Joseph May February 25, 2017 at 7:16 PM Thank you Jo

Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2017 at 8:37 PM Great one, Joseph! Joseph May February 21, 2017 at 9:59 PM Thank you Kim

Chris Green February 21, 2017 at 2:48 PM What a beautifully sad take on the contest photo. Really nicely done. Joseph May February 21, 2017 at 3:15 PM Thank you Chris

Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 12:34 PM You captured the image beautifully Jospeh I have just seen the contest pic - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Joseph May February 21, 2017 at 12:35 PM Thank you Jan...best wishes on yours