Trembling Hearts

A baby bird fell from its nest
cupped in my hands against my breast
its tiny body trembling there
with glistening eyes and fearful stare.
The heartbeat seemed to beat in time
and twice as fast and loud as mine;
its first attempt at wing denied,
now left my grasp at last to fly.

When at first you came to me
to hold your heart and comfort thee,
I felt that trembling close to you
especially when our love was new -
our breathing soft and interlaced
now safe within my soft embrace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 9:37 PM
This is a really lovely and heartfelt write Craig. So tender and genuine. Enjoyed :)
Sands Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 6:34 AM
I absolutely love this one Craig. It is so special :)
Richards Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Just gets better and better !! With each one, I am seeing the deep poignancy, that draws me in. :) This is my kind of stuff ! I want to feeeeellll something ! :) And that is what you make me do !
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