Trembling

Trembling as the day approached trailing a thunderous storm darkness moved in fast earth trembling in the cold wind nature bursts with emotion
For Tanka me a sad song contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 3:54 PM
I really like this one, Erich. Congrats on the HM
Goller Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 8:51 PM
thank you very much Andrea,Hugs!Erich
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Erich. Love, Carol
Goller Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 12:15 PM
thank you very much Carol. Hughs!Errich
Sweetheart Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 4:16 AM
CONGRATS ERICH ON AN AWESOME WRITE AND WIN .. LUV IT LUV ..
Goller Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 12:14 PM
thank you very much Linda,Hugs!Erich
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October 23, 2012 at 7:13 PM
ERICH, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD
Goller Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 12:13 PM
thank you very much,Hugs!Erich
A  Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 2:16 PM
E, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy
Goller Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 3:42 PM
thank you very much Skat,Hugs!Erich
Grisetti Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 8:32 PM
Love the images you have drawn.
Goller Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 9:19 PM
thank you very much Joann,Hugs!Erich
Brown Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 1:32 PM
Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Erich. Love, Carol
Goller Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 9:13 PM
thank you very much carol, Your welcome. Hugs!Erich
Grisetti Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 3:48 PM
a great tanka about the storm.
Goller Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 3:51 PM
thank you very much Joann,Hugs!Erich
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