Nette Onclaud Poet Senryu

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Trembles of Lust

as soft trembles yield

hands fondle valley of curves --
rousing night's ecstasy



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7/09/2019
Tania Kitchin's  Senryu about Greed, Lust, or Loss
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Panagiota Romios August 1, 2019 at 4:01 PM Awesome. Panagoota

Panagiota Romios July 15, 2019 at 6:49 PM Great Senryu. Best wishes PR

John Gondolf July 15, 2019 at 10:07 AM Wow, Nette...this is so beautifully sensual. Nicely penned my dear friend. Best of luck in the contest. John

Gershon Wolf July 14, 2019 at 7:24 PM Richard and I are on the same wavelength. Get out the hose for this one! whew! :) gw

Sandra Adams July 13, 2019 at 8:54 AM this is gorgeous Nette....a brilliant senryu that i am sure will be atop the winner's list! Bravo :) hugs

Harry Horsman July 11, 2019 at 8:30 AM It certainly does nette, love the poem.

Richard Lamoureux July 10, 2019 at 3:43 PM Hot, Hot, Hot!

Ashley Conte July 10, 2019 at 10:31 AM Artistically sensual and with such class!

John Lawless July 10, 2019 at 7:09 AM hot-hot-hot.....magnificently metaphoric on so many levels......

M. L. Kiser July 9, 2019 at 5:54 PM Perfect imagery here; beautifully done; good luck in the contest.