Tremble My Heart

Tremble my heart, 
follow my lead this way
Listen to the violins,
Before they begin to play.

As the doves cry, in sorrow
& the hogs, grunt at the moon.
They will be waiting for you,
In a ditch meant, for your tomb.

Listen to the mockingbirds
The ruffles of, each tree.
The lonely dark, skyline
Thats where they will be.

If your looking for love
Please dont look, that way
If you want them, as they want you.
Be prepared to dance,
In a gloomy graveyard ballroom.

Dont feel sorry for them,
As they dont care for you.
The cruelty of true love,
Is buried in this cemetary
Of doom.

Dont be afraid, as yet
Dont walk away
The prayers & angels surrounding you
Have saved your life today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/24/2014 8:59:00 PM
Well written, lovely and strong... Congratulation on your feature poem ..... Ellie....xoxo
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Date: 2/24/2014 6:41:00 PM
Thank you Charlie for sharing your original poem,I enjoy reading it,Ivy
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Date: 2/24/2014 3:06:00 AM
† I Ain't Afraid Of No Ghost Nor Goblins, Sweet Beautiful Cherie ˜ But I Do Love Your Precious Heart's Wonderful Feature; Especially It's Inspiring In Both Beauty As Love's Final Stanza: Bravo *:*(* My Love, Always, John
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Date: 9/23/2013 8:22:00 AM
Cherie, this is full of depth and heart. The imagery and feeling you put into each line, pulls the reader in. nice job
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Date: 8/1/2013 9:51:00 AM
Poet, excellent poem. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poetry I'm thankful. I love this poem Cherie
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/1/2013 10:02:00 AM
Hi sean ,,,,,thanks so much truly :) you liked it...peace always stay cool:) ~<3 cherie
Date: 7/1/2013 1:40:00 PM
Hey Cherie, What's Up Girl ? This Is Crazy Cool! ˜ The Hogs Howling At The Moon. Smile, Your Beauty Made Me Laugh But Yes, Beauty Is Truly What I Do Find And, I Love The Ending ˜ I Am Going To Favour Your Splendours Because, Beautiful Vibes Inside Your Eyes ˜ Love, John
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/4/2013 5:57:00 AM
Hey johnny always a pleasure when you stop by, reading your comment really uplifted me today. I needed that thankyou, my friend!!! Yes beware of the hogs johnny LOL, So glad you liked that. And glad you love the ending, we need those kind of endings, johnny blessings always!!! ~ ? cherie
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