Get Your Premium Membership

Tremble My Heart

Tremble my heart, follow my lead this way Listen to the violins, Before they begin to play. As the doves cry, in sorrow & the hogs, grunt at the moon. They will be waiting for you, In a ditch meant, for your tomb. Listen to the mockingbirds The ruffles of, each tree. The lonely dark, skyline Thats where they will be. If your looking for love Please dont look, that way If you want them, as they want you. Be prepared to dance, In a gloomy graveyard ballroom. Dont feel sorry for them, As they dont care for you. The cruelty of true love, Is buried in this cemetary Of doom. Dont be afraid, as yet Dont walk away The prayers & angels surrounding you Have saved your life today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/24/2014 8:59:00 PM
Well written, lovely and strong... Congratulation on your feature poem ..... Ellie....xoxo
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2014 6:41:00 PM
Thank you Charlie for sharing your original poem,I enjoy reading it,Ivy
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2014 3:06:00 AM
† I Ain't Afraid Of No Ghost Nor Goblins, Sweet Beautiful Cherie ˜ But I Do Love Your Precious Heart's Wonderful Feature; Especially It's Inspiring In Both Beauty As Love's Final Stanza: Bravo *:*(* My Love, Always, John
Login to Reply
Date: 9/23/2013 8:22:00 AM
Cherie, this is full of depth and heart. The imagery and feeling you put into each line, pulls the reader in. nice job
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2013 9:51:00 AM
Poet, excellent poem. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poetry I'm thankful. I love this poem Cherie
Login to Reply
Thomas Avatar
Cherie Thomas
Date: 8/1/2013 10:02:00 AM
Hi sean ,,,,,thanks so much truly :) you liked it...peace always stay cool:) ~<3 cherie
Date: 7/1/2013 1:40:00 PM
Hey Cherie, What's Up Girl ? This Is Crazy Cool! ˜ The Hogs Howling At The Moon. Smile, Your Beauty Made Me Laugh But Yes, Beauty Is Truly What I Do Find And, I Love The Ending ˜ I Am Going To Favour Your Splendours Because, Beautiful Vibes Inside Your Eyes ˜ Love, John
Login to Reply
Thomas Avatar
Cherie Thomas
Date: 7/4/2013 5:57:00 AM
Hey johnny always a pleasure when you stop by, reading your comment really uplifted me today. I needed that thankyou, my friend!!! Yes beware of the hogs johnny LOL, So glad you liked that. And glad you love the ending, we need those kind of endings, johnny blessings always!!! ~ ? cherie

Book: Reflection on the Important Things