Tremble

I shake,
tremble,
my body 
no longer longing,
my finger-shadow 
vibrates 
above the keys 
that make music 
of me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 11:03 PM
Are you a pianist? I love jamming on mine and know the feeling of being at a deadlock, with my fingers hovering above the keys. Sometimes it feels like the music is playing me, not the other way around. I'm surprised this hasn't gotten any comments... a real melancholy tone to this one. Enjoyed!
Jordan Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 8:19 AM
I'm not the least bit musical. I regret that I didn't take my mother's advice and learn the piano. She tried...
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