Trekking

My bag is almost full with what I can call
a house;
I'm not prepping-
greener pastures my soul seeks....



Name: Teddy Kimathi

Contest: SOMETHING WITH GREAT IMPACT!

Date: 17/12/2015

Words used:20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gibson Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:21 AM
You put this together very well, Teddy! Congratulations.
Kimathi Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 3:47 AM
Thank you very much Faye! *^_^*
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:02 AM
nice win
Kimathi Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Thanks Skat! *^_^* <3
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:01 AM
a pack of fine images; well done, teddy..warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs"
Kimathi Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 3:46 AM
Hi Nette. It was a really wonderful contest!!! ;-) Thank you for your colorful applause!! *^_^* <3
Nyaga Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Nice one Teddy, and best of luck in the contest, trekking am reminded of hippies, great piece *******BLESSINGS
Kimathi Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:05 AM
Thanks bro! I didn't think about that! The trekker might be a hippie.... You have taken me back in the 70s, when John Lennon demonstrated peacefully with his music for American soldiers to return home in one piece, from Vietnam..... BLESSINGS TO YOU TOO BRO!! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 6:47 PM
good one in 20 words. Boy, this one I need to put my thinking cap on!!
Kimathi Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 3:59 AM
Hahahaha..... Thanks Andrea! ;-) I almost took half an hour to have it right! :-0
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