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Trek Through a Winter Wonderland

Nearby are we to a beautiful lake,
the deepest one in the whole USA.
A trek to its rim we’re ready to take
on this wonderful snowy winter’s day.
Wearing our snowshoes, by sunlight’s first ray,
we go round Rim Drive; we’re well on our way!

At Windy Ridge, we can feel a light breeze
as we breathe in the air so crisp and clean.
Then onward we go, surrounded by trees.
This winter wonderland glistens – pristine,
and being a part of this perfect scene,
we cannot help feeling simply serene.

Beyond us on the horizon we see
the ridges of mountains outlined in blue.
White frosting adorns each tree prettily
when the best part of all comes into view!
It matches the sky’s most beautiful hue.
To gaze at this lake is all we can do!

A rose dusk turns into a sapphire night.
We camp underneath the brilliant starlight.

Dec. 29, 2018 for the Winter Wonderland Contest
and for Eve Roper's Sleeping Volcano Poetry Contest;
 the Crater Lake was my inspiration.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Congratulations wonderful poem!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Beautiful Andrea! Congratulations on your first place win! : ) xxoo
Roper Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Andrea, you created what I was looking for, a poem with great imagery and feeling. Thank you so much for entering my contest. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Delightfully beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
Watson Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 11:14 AM
I doubt if I shall ever visit the area but it sounds wonderful in your description,Andrea. Congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations Andrea, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, due to the exacting syllable counts and perfect rhyme requirements this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Ober Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 6:34 AM
I just love your sonnets! You are one of the only poets who uses enjambment so seamlessly. To answer your question, I will be on here whenever I have time (which, let's be honest - with work and a one year old, might not be as often as I'd like!)
Gondolf Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Beautiful imagery, Andrea, being from Texas and winter being my least favorite season, I didn't get very far with this challenge. Best of luck and happy new year my friend! John
Ashley Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:26 AM
A winter wonderland, indeed. Nature and your wonderful sonnet are so inspiring, Andrea. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes to you for a happy new year.. ~Susan
Lamoureux Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 2:06 AM
Gorgeous imagery. Happy New Year Andrea.
Michael Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Such a beautiful scene...the mystique of nature...All the best Andrea...Happy New Year
Duet Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Beautiful, Andrea! You took me on a wonderful winter wonderland trek.
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 1:59 PM
what gorgeous imagery Andrea, i struggle with a normal sonnet, this is beyond my capabilities with extra lines lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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