Trees With Requited Shadows


Shadows, my shape like drunkenness,
trees walking into my mirror,
windows' strange flush as boughs break in;
do walls rise in whitewashed ember?
The dust of death I remember,
and that dust kills me back in bed.
I know you're coming down again,
falling without even a scream.
I see your face move in each wind —
The night's thousand shadows of trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:01 PM
Very eerie one. Great title for it.
Hayward Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:30 AM
"windows' strange flush as boughs break in; do walls rise in whitewashed ember? The dust of death I remember, and that dust kills me back in bed" Effortlessly written like turning the next page you are not willing to... Fantastic poetry. my dear..
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 3:35 PM
Love this one! Fantastic line: trees walking into my mirror!
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 4:09 AM
the beauty of this piece lies in deep imprints of loneliness...how sublime, paige!
Hayward Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 9:19 AM
"do walls rise in whitewashed ember? The dust of death I remember," Brilliant!!!
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 5:28 AM
I love big trees very much! Shade is highly appreciated in mid summer day lol. Have a nice day lovely poetess :-) Have a nice day ~ AA
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 5:14 AM
I am feeling you need better coverage of your windows so the tree shadows can't get in.
George Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 5:08 AM
Through open windows, trees cast a number of shadows, especially when their branches dance in wind. A lovely poem dear Paige.
Poet Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 4:41 AM
Paige, this is a wonderful poem that primarily explores themes of transformation and the beauty of the natural world as it transitions between day and night.
Sharma  Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:25 AM
Dear sweet Paige, this is just so poignant and moving, I felt chills while reading your evocative words ~ how some memories and the essence never truly leaves, they continue to haunt us in the absence. This feels like a poetic abyss and there's so much more to your lines.. i didn't want it to end, but seems absolutely impeccable just as it is.. some parts really hit me especially "Shadows, my shape like drunkenness" and "trees walking into my mirror" your imagine is just otherworldly. "I know you're coming down again" sigh yes.. we just know.. we feel it.. very well .. and that last line! So brilliantly inked. I just love everything about this. "Whitewashed ember" sigh that made me see and think so much. Pleasure reading your words always. Sending you light and best wishes ~ Hugsz
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 1:41 AM
- A deep poem...sounds a little scary, Paige - hugs
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