Trees

Trees whisper 
Secrets untold
summer wind
picnic lunch
A Lovers kiss
A childs embrace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Otieng Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Wonderful write Carmen.
Gifford Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:27 PM
I like to read poems about trees and nature. This one says a lot in a few words. I like to hug a tree and have it whisper to me in its own language.
Sunshine Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:48 PM
Thank you :)
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 6:36 PM
love the image of the whispering trees here:-) hugs janxx
Sunshine Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:48 PM
Thank you :)
Sunshine Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:46 PM
Thank you ??
Gorelick Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 6:18 PM
I enjoyed your poem very much.l Don't think it is a haiku though.. You nailed the secrets kept by trees ...BG
Sunshine Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:46 PM
thank you
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