Trees

If Nature’s wrath we could appease
By sacrificing noble trees,
Then She should well be satisfied,
For scores of trees have up and died.

I reconnoitered city blocks
Where people stood, absorbing shocks
Of once majestic elms and oaks
Destroyed by Mother Nature’s strokes.

Some split in half, their branches strewn
And lives extinguished, years too soon;
So helplessly they languish, prone,
Their false facade of vigor blown.

The storm recedes, the damage done,
The clean-up barely just begun;
But roots and hearts alike were torn.
We sweep up limbs and leaves and mourn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:41 AM
EXCELLENT WRITE WITH BEAUTIFUL RHYME ILENE .. WE LOST TONS OF TREES TO HURRICANE SANDY HERE IN NEW JERSEY .. SO TRAGIC TO SEE THEM FALL AND DIE .. THANKSS FOR SHARING LUV ..
Poet Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 8:33 PM
Just wonderful Ilene!You are a gifted poet.
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Ilene, this is a wonderful tribute to these poor old trees we have sacrificed. Your great feeling for them is evident in this poem.
Onclaud Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 12:32 PM
wow, really descriptive and hits me on the right spots, ilene... a fine jewel of a piece..:) huggs!
Whitehead Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 11:41 AM
This is a fantastic poem written in iambic tetrameter, a very popular style for poetry. I have read this today when I am sure that in many many places of America many noble trees have been sacrificed to the storm. I hope you are safe ilene - and your lovely trees too.
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 9:58 AM
What an incredibly wonderful poem you have written here. Excellent piece. Bravo!
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