Treed - For One Liner Contest

TREED  

Family – its what falls out when you shake the tree.


12/6/2015

submitted to - One liners three – Poetry contest
sponsor – Silent One
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Merryman Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 8:50 PM
I like this humorous take on family, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Gentry Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 12:11 AM
:) Good one!
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Susan.
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 6:09 PM
very clever. Congrats.
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December 9, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Thank you Andrea
Haight Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 5:22 PM
Nicely said, John. Congrats on your nice win. Sandra
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:52 PM
thanks Sandra
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Love it! Congratulations with your wonderful win, John! :~)Eve
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:52 PM
thanks Eve
A  Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:42 PM
John, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:52 PM
thanks SKAT
Lane Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:51 PM
well done, John. congrats
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:51 PM
thanks Lin...
Negron Flores Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest John.
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:51 PM
thank you Nayda
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:35 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in "One liners three- family" contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:51 PM
- A good one, John - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:50 PM
thank you Anne Lise
Godwin Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:35 AM
Adorable! Very good, John ... CayCay
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:50 PM
thank you CayCay....it has been said that there's a wrench to fit every nut in the family....
Y. Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 8:37 PM
John, I enjoyed your take on the theme. Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:49 PM
thanks Alexis for stopping to read and comment
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