Tree Spriit

Miniscule shadow
Beneath the blue clouded sky
Hides spirit of tree
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 4:52 PM
gentle and soft as the view! Light & Love
Pate Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 4:08 PM
Nicely written. Thought provoking and original. Here you show that even the mighty oak has a beginning and a whimsical soul.
Goff Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 8:51 PM
I love this spiritual capture of Raul's picture! Cecil! a winner!!! jim
Devonshire Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 10:58 PM
Beautiful haiku, Cecil! I'm sure you'll do well in the contest with this great write. Love, Carolyn
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June 26, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Wow! I really like the perspective in this one. The last line is my favorite. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend! Karen
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June 26, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest Cecil...Raul
Chu Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 11:27 PM
5, 7, 5. I just tried one. I felt so restricted. I never thought of it that way: the way a shadow can be a spirit.
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