Tree Contest:

Tree contest
4/20/11
Roxanna Johnson

"To hold, as 'twere, the mirror up to nature."
                  
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Branches sway
in this warm season of early May.

Hot sands and bare feet
sounds of ocean waves cool the afternoon heat.

Cold drinks and lawn chairs sit underneath my special tree.
This is the happiest I'll ever be.

Lying here with large palms shading my eyes
I watch boats on the emerging tide rise.

This tree provides shade on hot days
it soothes and comforts me in some ways.

It is a beautiful tall palm tree that makes me smile. 
Now I think I'll just lie under it for a long while.
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Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 7:00 AM
Congratulations Roxanna on your win in Constance's "The Tree" contest. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Beautiful poem.Congrats Roxanna on your win---kash
Mehta Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, Roxanna
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 2:54 PM
oh, this is delightful. A relaxing palm tree swaying with shade. LOVE it. Congratulations, Roxanna.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 9:14 PM
Congrats Roxanna on your wonderful winning poem in the tree contest with this lovely entry .. enjoy your great win as u celebrate the joy of Easter Sunday with luv..
Freeman Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Great to see you in the winner's circle, Roxanna. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 5:58 PM
There are many palms where I live, Roxanne. Love the way you described them and the view you see of the boats. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Thanks(:
La France Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 4:07 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Lovely!
Mehta Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Nice write on the palm trees with calm ocean, I can relate to this easily. Roxanna
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