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I saw a story, on the news this morning, out divers preparing an Easter egg hunt. 

pink basket, diving for eggs this plastic okay as long as they are all recovered and don’t lay like a wreck in the sea pink basket, frog kick, acrobatics and bubbles amidst the handpicked Easter eggs, beholding treasures of the deep pink basket, God’s eye deep and wide, never misses our whereabouts neither our joys or sufferings the cross on land never plunged into the deep, but the blood of Christ counts all the loss and the returns are endless pink basket, divers give the thumbs up everyone is okay feeling blessed, not one is lost

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Date: 4/2/2024 3:31:00 PM
Kim...another interesting story of easter. Glad they recovered all the eggs. Must have been fun for all diving and watching.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/3/2024 5:16:00 AM
I bet so! Thank you!
Date: 4/1/2024 4:39:00 PM
interesting how a piece of news can inspire us...the world is a fount of poems waiting to be written...just have to open our eyes. Lovely poem, Have a blessed evening, hugs Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2024 4:52:00 PM
Love the sea and it was fun to see them having some underwater fun on Easter :)
Date: 4/1/2024 8:53:00 AM
Glad a snippet of news inspired you to write such a wonderful poem. Glad too that you are so religious like me. Best for a win. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2024 10:14:00 AM
You are a blessing to me! Thank you, dear Victor!
Date: 4/1/2024 8:15:00 AM
Dont you just love it when you are inspired by something to see an write a wonderful poem.. Nicely done Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much! We find our inspiration within and all around us, in perspective, newness, in silence and loudness. God bless you, dear one! I am so glad you are keeping up with your writing, giving us all the joy of your perspective.

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