'treasured Commodity'

The reflection says 
you've outgrown us 

I somehow feel sad – 

That which we once had 
has become redundant 

The other side of the coin 
says I should be happy 
‘Cause you've found that inner power,
the ability to go out on your own

and yet letting go
   is like losing 
a part of me 

that object that I’ve grown 
accustomed too –

So I’ll be a bit teary 
even feel a bit used 
but I’ll always be grateful 

no one knew the role you played 
sometimes not knowing 
is a treasured commodity


©120720121045
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 9:16 PM
This is so wonderful, Wilma. You show such wisdom in your writing. how are you feeling since your surgery, sweetie?
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July 15, 2012 at 3:06 PM
Wilma, this is exquisite and beautiful...something a Mother woruld say to her child..just awespme. Love it so much that I'm going to "fav" it. Get well soon and God bless always. Much love, Annalise
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July 14, 2012 at 3:08 PM
You are an amazing poet. This is a slice of what an Angel you are. Cape Town Honey with a warm loving heart. Dr Michael with bag always ready for a house call. Luv n hugs Michael
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 12:08 PM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Wilma. I look forward to reading more of it as time permits. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 10:32 AM
softly intense poesy, wilms... sensitive and full of wisdom.. enjoyed the contrast approach.. best of luck and hugggs!
Sivey Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Wilma, this is a very powerful write, with a wonderful message! I really enjoyed the immensity of this poem, it's got a special place in my heart! I just loved the dilemma between letting go and the will to move on! Fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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July 12, 2012 at 4:20 AM
Love these indepth lines Wilma.Check for the typo'roll'.
Nair Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 3:10 AM
A fine read, Wilma, depicting the wrench of separation from whatever we had been used to, Jag
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