Kim Merryman Poet Quatrain

Treasure of My Soul

I held an angel in my arms today,
A precious babe snuggled against my breast.
And my heart was overwhelmed with so much love,
As she lay contentedly at rest.

I watched her as she slept so soundly,
Gazed at her cherub face in sweet repose.
I marveled at her tiny features,
Like her dainty shell-like ears and button nose.

I brushed my lips against her downy head,
Her skin like velvet to my touch.
I gave thanks to God above for His priceless blessing
Of this little angel girl I love so much.

The birth of my first grandchild has awakened,
A joy that my soul cannot contain.
From day one my heart's been captured by her,
Firmly caught and held by love's strong chain.


8/9/13
Entered in Shadow Hamilton's "Your Favorite Old Poem" contest

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Maria Williams March 3, 2017 at 11:16 PM Pulls at the heartstrings, you've captured these feelings so well in this poem. Well written, and I love the flow Kim Merryman March 12, 2017 at 4:37 PM Thank you, Maria!

Arlene Binner March 13, 2016 at 7:42 PM A truly heartfelt poem, so beautifully written, and you definitely have talent!

Agona Apell March 6, 2016 at 12:58 AM This is what we need poets for: to give wings to our leaden tongues. "...A precious babe snuggled against my breast. And my heart was overwhelmed with so much love, As she lay contentedly at rest. I watched her as she slept so soundly, Gazed at her cherub face in sweet repose. I marveled at her tiny features, Like her dainty shell-like ears and button nose. I brushed my lips against her downy head, Her skin like velvet to my touch..." Lovely piece!

Connie Marcum Wong February 24, 2016 at 2:47 AM You are my kind of poet Kim. You write with sincerity and love. Your poems inspire. I can so relate to this poem. It is lovely! #7

Debbie Duncan February 24, 2016 at 1:30 AM Well this is very sweet :)

Ralph Sergi February 23, 2016 at 4:08 PM Hi Kim: A very sweet emotional poem of a love of a child. My compliments.

Nicholas Windle February 23, 2016 at 3:35 PM for in this world of many whose how sweet the joy of love and the gift of life the pleasure that your words bring as they weave upon this page bless you

Paul Schneiter January 16, 2016 at 11:10 PM Kim, This jewel of a poem sweetly captures the enduring power of maternal love. It touches the heart. Thank you for sharing it. hugs x x x Kim Merryman January 26, 2016 at 12:33 PM Thank you, Paul! I'm glad you like it!

Old Buck August 21, 2015 at 2:02 PM Kim: Since I'm late reading this, that little babe is in the midst of their "terrible twos" by now. :o) We have 10 and impossible to pick favorites. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece. oldbuck Kim Merryman August 28, 2015 at 7:02 PM Yes, she just turned two last month and she is a handful, but wouldn't trade her for anything! Thanks for stopping by, Old Buck!

Joe Maverick June 10, 2015 at 5:04 PM Enjoyed reading of your emotional response to your grandchild Kim, and congrats on the placement..' Kim Merryman July 20, 2015 at 5:05 PM Thank you, Joe!

Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 11:48 AM Hi Kim! No wonder this is one of your favourite poems! It is touching, graceful and a delight to read. I have one granddaughter and she means the world to me! Congrats on a merited win. // paul Kim Merryman July 20, 2015 at 5:04 PM Thank you, Paul! My little Ava means the world to me, too.

Darlene Gifford June 9, 2015 at 6:50 PM I loved your poem about your first grandchild, Kim, congrats on your win and thanks so much for visiting my site today. Hugs, Darlene Kim Merryman July 20, 2015 at 5:02 PM Thank you, Darlene!

Skat A June 9, 2015 at 11:51 AM KIM. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT** Kim Merryman July 20, 2015 at 5:02 PM Thank you, Skat!

Jan Allison June 9, 2015 at 9:20 AM such a touching poem Kim I hope I am around long enough to see grandchildren! :-) Hugs jan xx Kim Merryman June 9, 2015 at 10:30 AM Thank you, Jan! Grandchildren are so much fun! They keep you young.

Joseph May June 9, 2015 at 6:32 AM Simply beautiful...Congrats on your win Kim Kim Merryman June 9, 2015 at 10:28 AM Thank you, Joseph! Appreciate your comments!

Robert Lindley June 8, 2015 at 10:11 PM Congratulations on a fine win and great poem my friend. A7 Kim Merryman June 9, 2015 at 10:27 AM Thank you, Robert! Appreciate your comments!

Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2015 at 8:42 PM What a beautiful write this is, Kim! Lovely and touching with such awesome imagery! Congratulations on your great win and congratulations on having such a treasure in your life! Warmest regards. Pandita Kim Merryman June 9, 2015 at 10:26 AM Thank you, Pandita! I appreciate your encouraging comments, and, yes, my granddaughter Ava is a treasure!

Shadow Hamilton June 8, 2015 at 8:31 PM your delight beams out Kim great write congrats on placing hugs Kim Merryman June 9, 2015 at 10:23 AM Shadow, thank you so much for my placement in your contest!

Valerie Staton May 9, 2015 at 6:36 AM There's nothing like a grandmother's love. Nicely written!

Moonbee Canady September 12, 2013 at 8:15 PM This is a perfect tribute to your grandbaby - I call poems like this a Heartstone because it is a touchstone in what we share as to what's good & beautiful in humanity... Nice work KM ... MoonBee

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper September 3, 2013 at 1:45 PM A beautiful tribute to your grandchild! Very heart-felt, well done! MC

Allan Koven August 25, 2013 at 11:35 AM A grand parent's lyrical praise of a child's blessing to a frayed world. Beautifully done. Allan

Katherine Braithwaite August 24, 2013 at 11:20 AM Very beautiful poem

Isaiah Zerbst August 23, 2013 at 4:07 PM Perfect poem! There is not really anything to say.

James Marshall Goff August 22, 2013 at 8:38 PM Wow! Kim! Blown away by your pure joy here! What a delight to read! jimbo

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