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Treasure Hunters

Like toy boats on a pond The ducklings swam in precise line One by One They ducked down, bottoms up Treasure Hunters One held a fish in its mouth

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Date: 8/23/2019 6:08:00 AM

Agree with the other comments...good imagery! Nice work. RT

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, RT! :) gw

Date: 8/23/2019 4:41:00 AM

Imagine hunting in a group of duckling... who catch eat first...nice imagery

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 10:46:00 AM

At least this hunt eliminates rifles! :) gw

Date: 8/23/2019 2:21:00 AM

I truly hope it is true, for I immediately pictured it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 10:46:00 AM

I can tell you that these ducklings in the pond are based on what I've seen over the years. As for 'truth,' I lay no claim to same. :) gw

Date: 8/22/2019 9:41:00 PM

I like your imagery, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2019 10:45:00 AM

Returning serve: I like your comment, Line! Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon