Tread On Me

For a second, 
I thought I was magic;
Floating on your high, 
Until you hung me out to dry
Now I look up at the sky
As a carpet that could never
Even fly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Iqbal Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Wow this is raw and honest in its stance.. how a person feels after being used and betrayed later on. Like a useless magic carpet who lost all its magic. A truly deserving micro for getting featured!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Congrats on being on Home Page with this creative but sad work. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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November 7, 2023 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your brilliant inspiring poem featured on Poetry Soup home page.
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