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Tread On Me

For a second, I thought I was magic; Floating on your high, Until you hung me out to dry Now I look up at the sky As a carpet that could never Even fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/10/2023 4:18:00 AM
Wow this is raw and honest in its stance.. how a person feels after being used and betrayed later on. Like a useless magic carpet who lost all its magic. A truly deserving micro for getting featured!!
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Date: 11/7/2023 1:46:00 PM
Congrats on being on Home Page with this creative but sad work. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 11/7/2023 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your brilliant inspiring poem featured on Poetry Soup home page.
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