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Treachery

What would you think, if: while tailing an orchestra of dinosoars one secretly turned to you and invited you into a cave to watch his favourite act; the murder of one of his friends

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Date: 1/27/2025 6:43:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:22:00 PM
DUNCAN, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 3/4/2013 11:28:00 AM
Well.. that would be.. interesting. Enjoyed the unique tone of this verse. Well written fellow S.African.:)
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