Treachery

What would you think, if:
while tailing an orchestra of dinosoars 
one secretly turned to you 
and invited you into a cave 
to watch his favourite act;
the murder of one of his friends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
January 27, 2025 at 6:43 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
A  Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 8:22 PM
DUNCAN, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Van Breda Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 11:28 AM
Well.. that would be.. interesting. Enjoyed the unique tone of this verse. Well written fellow S.African.:)
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