Travel Light

Through winding roads, life leads where it   …………………………………………     Will 
Reaching rugged mountain peaks and valleys deep,  until   ………………. .    You
Eventually arrive at this conclusion- each day is a gift- best take it   ...    Slow

 
Too few  breathe deeply when shadows gather and when at night, lay ..    Down                                                                                                                                   
Recall the sweet moments, like an offspring's first smile   ............            And
Leave  out slights that sting and  bitter words with acrid     ……………………   Smell 
                                                                                             
   
Like fallen leaves, the days turn to dust  and vanish beneath     ……………… The
                                        
Iridescent  sunlight and summer rains that water thirsty    ……………………    Roses
                                                                                              
Giving new life to all who with gratitude, acknowledge the gift    ……………   As
                                                                                      
Hope breathes tomorrows new chances to scale mountains   ………………      You 
                                                                                                
Traverse and the raging, wild rivers you'll cross on this arduous   …………Journey    
                                                                                                
 ~*~


4/30/14                                                                                                 
 Note:  For Jared's "Acrostic/End Line Word" Contest
4th Place
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Shuff Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 3:09 PM
Yes to me this work , expresses what most poets strive for. Introspective personalities, and achiveing, the Higher Realms of life , in thought and appreciation. And yet be humbled by the results.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 6:52 AM
Wow this is truly impressive Anne-Lise! I will bet this takes top honors. I love how this came together! Beautiful! 7 ; )
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 3:18 PM
One of my all time fav poems from you Light & Love.
Horne Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 3:19 PM
beautiful write, my friend - so glad to see this was a winner. Hope you and Andrea are well and that you're managing to get some relaxation. Have to work tomorrow but then I have 7 days off - paradise! Think of you every day and always remember you in my prayers xxx
Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Congrats on a fine win my friend!!!
A  Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Annalise, nice win,,, Hugs* SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Creative work using the old addage..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Dear Dimples, Your line "Very few breathe deeply as shadows gather" made remember that in times of strife, we sometimes lose those we thought loved us. Everyone wants to share the good, but few stand by us through the bad. Quite a thought-provoking poem, dear. Love you, Carolyn
Smith Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 8:35 AM
Nicely done Annalise...congrats Tim
Johnson Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Nicely done with a difficult form. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Nance Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Each day is a gift, recall sweet moments. Enjoyed your write. Well done
May Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 1:11 PM
I enjoyed this one ..congrats on a great win Annalise...
Lamoureux Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 12:47 PM
I really like how you did this, you had me enthralled from start to finish. Congratulations!
Pickett Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 11:33 AM
Very good Acrostic/End line poem. Clever, my eyes never left, captivated from start to finish. I shall return and read more.. Congratulations!!:JP)
Walker  Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Nice Annalise. Very nice. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Wonderful n witty Annalise ! Congrats on a merited win !
Horne Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 10:20 AM
love this clever write, my friend - a sure winner here
May Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Beautiful write Annalise..It was an enjoyable read...hugs
Harrell Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Ahhh, I like this! Very light :)
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