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Trauma Bleeds Through My Pen

Shall I allow my heart to break its fences and profusely bare its senses as my mind feels no fighting chances the soul divulges the pain’s incenses trauma bleeds through my pen with no pretences. ***** Shall I allow my heart to shed its shield and had its very pulses peeled with a mind of no power to wield so majestic the soul to blows yield trauma bleeds through my pen unable to be sealed. ***** Shall I allow my words to portray a huge affliction and conceal each ache with no slight friction as my pen takes great care with poetic diction to produce an artistic painting of wonderful depiction trauma bleeds through my pen in fact and fiction.

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Valsa George

Date: 11/30/2021 8:26:00 PM

Only poets can bare their heart with such poetic beauty and poignancy. When they allow their pen to bleed, emotions are let out freely and mind is purged of all gloom as if a great weight has been lifted. This is the cathartic effect of writing ! Beautifully penned, dear Besma! Loved reading it !

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2021 11:41:00 AM

Sweet friend Valsa, how kind of you to show great interest in my humble words.. you are of genuine beauty to grant me such honour which I highly value and cherish.. all my words won't suffice to say thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for the bliss you are spilling into my soul.. My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/24/2021 5:49:00 PM

Great, poets do indeed bleed. One must bleed to ink verses that reveal such strong and oft hidden emotions- to bare ones soul and gift unto others. That is the pure essence of poetry- and the pure essence of a true poet,imho. Your poetry rests in that category at a very high level! A fav... God bless....

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2021 11:26:00 AM

So much happy as I feel appreciated by a poet of grandeur ! I hold so dear your elevating words of praise, Robert.. deeply humbled and grateful.. Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/27/2021 9:59:00 AM

That is what a true poetess or poet does my good friend and soul sister, we bleed all our emotions through a pen to put down on paper how we feel and sense and appreciate. Sometimes however we need to fly overhead and look down with our soul upon our human form and take cognisance of the fact that the heart within us needs to be free so that our (yours in this instance) pen can bleed both fact and fiction to our readers and the world. All my hugs, and love, dear Besma, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/6/2021 5:58:00 AM

All my love and hugs to you sweet Jenny! My deepest gratitude for your ongoing support and uplifting words.. We have the pen to dive into the Self and unveil all the thoughts, aches and worries.. So wonderful of you to set your warmth on my very soul.. My warmest wishes and best regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/17/2021 1:29:00 PM

Dear Besma, your verses are so inspiring and full of imagery and imagination auspiciously build, in a state of the art that shows an unbeatable potential, To interweave words and sentences in several interconnected purity and brilliance: to produce an artistic painting of wonderful depiction trauma bleeds through my pen in fact and fiction. My profound respect and best wishes"

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/12/2021 9:32:00 AM

It is with such constructive and appreciative feedback that a poet's pen not just bleeds trauma but also flows with mesmerizing beauty! Thank you so much, Lasaad for your honouring words and remarkable humility! My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 3/8/2021 5:44:00 PM

Yes you shall, Besma! That’s what poetry is all about. So absolutely allow your heart to break its fences. Great poem!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/12/2021 9:24:00 AM

Oh! Thank you so much for so warm and sensitive feedback! So much pleased and honoured by your presence, Jennifer.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/5/2021 2:25:00 AM

I can understand your trauma. Must have been quite hard to to compose a poem in monorhyme style. Yet I find beauty in your verse.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/12/2021 9:21:00 AM

Always striving to meet a level of poetry beauty and satisfy a reader's thirst.. thank you so much, Victor for your great response! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/4/2021 2:27:00 PM

When emotions bleed through poetry they resonate with your unique style--as you so well illustrate in this poem.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/12/2021 9:15:00 AM

A feedback of great worth! I can't thank you enough for your continuous encouragement and kind words! Thank you so much, dear Vijay! My deepest regards and blessings.