Trapped In the Land of the Free

Even though you're miles away,
The thought of you still brings you home.
Your paper dragon guards my gates,
Reminds me that I'm not alone.

I wait beneath the milky sky,
Of another royal day,
Whilst half a turn, your home flag flies,
Underneath the milky way.

The rain today, it washed the earth,
And made clear tracks along my skin.
But no amount of heaven's tears,
Could drown the print you've made within.

A print which now suggests to me,
You might then share your Lover name,
When I am yours and you are mine,
The check-mate starts another game.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 4:41 PM
A marvelous title. Then you proceed to lay out your piece with satiny smooth cadence, exceptional imagery, fine rhyming and deeply felt emotions. I am amazed by your skill and artistry. Keith
Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Annie. Love Carol
Brown Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Annie. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:56 PM
This was sweet. congrats on having it featured. Vince
Austin Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Love is a game I suppose. The "paper dragon" is a real stroke. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave
Malark Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 2:50 PM
I love the imagery. Imagery is everything. Your poet Tayler
Fraser Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Beautiful sweet tender loving poetry Annie >> James :)
Chappell Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 4:20 PM
very powerful piece here my friend
Edwards Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 4:35 PM
hey, sounds sad and lonely, and also suggests that you're holding onto a promise? No games, just love-that's what you need, and what you'll find--no games in love,EVA!!
Culverhouse Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 2:55 PM
well written poem...with a sadness for the loneliness.
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