Trapped In the Fog

Can somebody please explain to me?
Why is it that she hates what she sees?
A seemingly perfect life
She is forced to hide behind a smile
Scared to face the truth
With a glance in the mirror, she doesn’t recognize her own reflection
A young girl’s view so distorted she feels so lost
Terrified to disappoint, she forces herself to smile
The girl trapped inside, so desperate to break free
And with every passing moment, the beauty inside begins to fade
It fades further and further away
She has lost herself
So desperate to belong, yet she is unable to move on
Unaware of the damage she has caused, she lives in a dream
She is trapped in the fog
She continues to live her seemingly perfect life
Never showing the fear
Never showing the pain
Never showing the tears, she hides from herself
Her reality is one where the truth can no longer be found
Why is it that no one can see the beauty of the girl trapped inside?
Why it is that no one can see that this girl is me??
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations Raina on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 10:03 PM
Good writing, Raina, congratulations. luv, andrea
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:45 AM
Many congratulations Raina on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Congrats on your win, Raina
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Congrats Raina on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest with this awesome write and super win today.. enjoy and happy weekend ..with luv..
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Hi Raina --congrats on being one of my winners with this insightful write of yours-- I can somehow relate to this as well-- nikko :)
Mills Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Quite reflective and introspective. Incredible poetry. keep the pen flowing and welcome to poetry soup. Love, Susan
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