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Trapped In a Nightmare

frantic mom posts flyers of missing daughter duct taped girl cries in the darkness 7/16/11 Received 4th place in "septolet "contest

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/21/2011 4:08:00 AM

Wow Susan you chose a topic that is so relevant especially in the society we live in.. Congratulations on your win :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Susan. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 7/20/2011 9:35:00 AM

Wow, scary write, my friend. Many congratulations, Susan : )

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/20/2011 12:37:00 AM

Many congrats on your deserved win

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2011 8:48:00 PM

loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2011 7:37:00 PM

oh, wow, your is sad but SO well related these two ideas. An awesome idea!! congratulations on your win.

Elaine George

Date: 7/19/2011 7:04:00 PM

Wow!!! What a powwerful image you have painted with this Septolet, Susan. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/19/2011 4:46:00 PM

sad....congrats on the win!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/19/2011 3:44:00 PM

Susan u are crusin' with all these contest wins luv.. more congrats coming your way for excellence in poetry once again my friend..luv..

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/19/2011 3:28:00 PM

my congrats on your win...Susan..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 3:24:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/19/2011 2:48:00 PM

My congratulations on this place win in my contest, Susan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/18/2011 5:49:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Susan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2011 11:58:00 AM

wow.. everyone is now hoping little Caylee did not suffer .. intense poetry Susan... good luck in the contest.. a tragedy... turned to pondering thoughts in poetry luv..

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/18/2011 11:47:00 AM

Succinct, but speaking volumes! Very well done!This poem not only speaks, it cries! It will take one exceptional poem to beat this in the contest!! 7/7! Love, Robert.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 11:24:00 AM

I am stopping by to thank you so much for your comments. They are truly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration Susan. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2011 10:35:00 AM

nice phrasing and inagery, susan... winning wishes to you! :) hugggs, nette

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/18/2011 7:56:00 AM

Beautifully penned.I hope this will do well in the contest.cheers