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Trapped In a Nightmare

frantic mom
posts flyers 
of missing 
daughter

duct taped girl
cries 
in the darkness


7/16/11

Received 4th place in "septolet "contest

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Wilma Neels

July 21, 2011 at 4:08 AM

Wow Susan you chose a topic that is so relevant especially in the society we live in.. Congratulations on your win :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 20, 2011 at 11:44 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Susan. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

July 20, 2011 at 9:35 AM

Wow, scary write, my friend. Many congratulations, Susan : )

Joseph Osita

July 20, 2011 at 12:37 AM

Many congrats on your deserved win

Nette Onclaud

July 19, 2011 at 8:48 PM

loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2011 at 7:37 PM

oh, wow, your is sad but SO well related these two ideas. An awesome idea!! congratulations on your win.

Elaine George

July 19, 2011 at 7:04 PM

Wow!!! What a powwerful image you have painted with this Septolet, Susan. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Doris Culverhouse

July 19, 2011 at 4:46 PM

sad....congrats on the win!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 19, 2011 at 3:44 PM

Susan u are crusin' with all these contest wins luv.. more congrats coming your way for excellence in poetry once again my friend..luv..

Juanita Warden

July 19, 2011 at 3:28 PM

my congrats on your win...Susan..

Sara Kendrick

July 19, 2011 at 3:24 PM

Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 19, 2011 at 2:48 PM

My congratulations on this place win in my contest, Susan

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 18, 2011 at 5:49 PM

Thanks for the entry, Susan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 18, 2011 at 11:58 AM

wow.. everyone is now hoping little Caylee did not suffer .. intense poetry Susan... good luck in the contest.. a tragedy... turned to pondering thoughts in poetry luv..

Zzzzz Zzzzz

July 18, 2011 at 11:47 AM

Succinct, but speaking volumes! Very well done!This poem not only speaks, it cries! It will take one exceptional poem to beat this in the contest!! 7/7! Love, Robert.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 11:24 AM

I am stopping by to thank you so much for your comments. They are truly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration Susan. Love, Carol