Mohan Chutani Poet Sijo

Trapped Colours

colours of rainbow conspired to be free, and run amok, 
dancing wildly on vivid canvas, disjoining from its arched bow, 
elements and spirits gladly soaked them in deep, to shine.


Date: 31.1.2015

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:46 PM Mohan, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2015 at 3:32 PM Congrats on your winning work..I enjoyed reading it..Sara

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:25 PM Dropping back with my congrats Mohan-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos February 8, 2015 at 1:51 PM Mohan, what an enthralling entry! Congratulations on a wonderful win! Warmest regards. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 8:50 AM I really like this one, congratulations.

Paul Callus February 8, 2015 at 7:21 AM Very lovely and descriptive take on this visual, Mohan! Your rainbow colours find joy in freedom. Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 8, 2015 at 5:26 AM Great imagery Mohan... happy on your win. God bless. rajat

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 1:04 AM This is so nice, Mohan. thanks for entering my contest and congrats for your win.

Sara Kendrick February 1, 2015 at 6:18 AM Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I can't remember what this picture looked like but I like your interpertation..Sara

John Lawless January 31, 2015 at 5:11 PM Good luck in the contest, Mohan. A most colorful Sijo

Jan Allison January 31, 2015 at 5:57 AM beautiful visual description Mohan - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser January 31, 2015 at 12:18 AM An interesting and unexpected look at this visual. Well done!

Poesy Relish January 30, 2015 at 10:57 PM Loved your take on the topic... best wishes,nads!