Trapped By Luminosity

Enjoyed the write Nick,..Can see parallels here..

Cute reference to Mr. Moth....first time EVER I have read a poem about these under-appreciated insects....great lines, Nick. Great lines!!! Hope u are doing well,...I need to catch up on some of your work.....what IS your favorite topics to write of...please tell. Curious. Gwendolen

Hey Nick! Have missed seeing your new works around!! Hope you are well'!

how imaginative... you made me fly, nick!...luminous! ;) huggs, nette

LOL ahhhhh sometimes it happens to the best of us! light & love and thanks for stopping by!

Love it Nick, a unique way to express your gentle nature.

funny....had to read it wtice to get it!!

Cute one..Enjoyed...Sara

they luv to cling to that light Nick.. nice imagery luv.. yes the last line is a little flat on my Limerick but the contest required us fitting our PS name into the Limerick ..hard when u have a long name like mine..oh.. appreciate the critique.. are u entering luv.?

YES ! WE CAN INTERPRET THE POEM IN DIFFERENT WAYS...I GOT IT AND LIKED IT EVEN...

oh, sweet.. I like this. Wonderin', tho, how can you tell if it's a Mr or a Ms? Happy day~N

Thanks for your kind comments..glad that i came across this piece..brilliant..alot of meaning in it..love it.

I laughed. Good one Nick. Tony

I agree with Bobb's comment. Your poem has a lovely message. Many thanks for your nice comment on my autumn poem.

I don't normaly like this style of poetry. But you made a very good visual and made me think. We are all just like that moth we get trapped by the false lights of society, by lights that can blind and kill us. Then Christ comes along and switches them off and saves us so we can be free to pursue His true light that frees and heals instead of trapping and killing. Thank you I am glad that I read it.