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Dressed in pajamas and no robe
Out the back door she went 
A bag of garbage in her hand
Grandson slammed door with intent

He'll lock Granny out its a  fun game
She turns around; panic
sets in, a child alone; danger
Feelings like the Titanic

Think__ no phone, no key, can't leave,
not dressed, what can be done?
Stand back, put feelings aside
She will not be outdone_

Thieves break in so why can't I
Go walk around the house
Right now one thing for sure can not
totally lean on spouse

Memory uploads a good thought
One window will not lock
It opens wide without a hitch
No longer race the clock 

This was about 16 years ago and I was a lot younger and more agile then but I found something to climb on and got in the window and fell in the house on the floor..I was scratched, bruised and sore but I got in where he was so he was not alone..Then I got to thinking about that broken window and they gave me feelings that were unsettled..We got that fixed though..Sara

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Date: 9/3/2017 8:09:00 AM
wonderful story, so glad to read your poetry again Sara.
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Date: 9/1/2017 7:03:00 PM
So enjoyed your poem. It brought back memories of when my son was young. Thank you for that.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2017 7:49:00 AM
Alesia, I am delighted that you got a pleasant memory from the poem..It is good to remember the good times in our lives..Thank you for dropping by, reading and taking time to comment..Sara
Date: 8/31/2017 6:58:00 PM
What an experience Sara! well written story here :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/1/2017 6:33:00 AM
Heidi, Your presence is uplifting..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 8/31/2017 6:40:00 PM
Hi Sara, this is Emma, Russell's wife, if you don't know already he's in the hospital with broken bones in his back. He fell in the tub (clumsy like me). He's fine, just some pain right now. He's mending and hope to be back to normal is 3 months or so. I don't remember if I had told you all this before, so I hope I'm not repeating myself to you. Sorry if I am. I remember when Abigail liked to lock doors. She never locked us out, but she has locked the door behind us. Luckily we had a key....
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/1/2017 6:33:00 AM
Emma, So sorry to hear about Russell's accident..I hope that he heals without any problems and will be back up and going soon..Thanks for letting me know..Tell Russell thanks for dropping by and reading my work..Sara
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Date: 8/31/2017 6:42:00 PM
Anyway, Russell would like to say something, Ha! "I really enjoyed having this poem read to me this evening. You still impress me by your wonderful work my friend. You never know what little kids will do, they are ornery sometimes. This is a glorious and wondrous poem Sara. Such a delight to read you again. Great work."
Date: 8/31/2017 4:03:00 PM
Lovely tribute to a sweet memory of your time with the playful grandson, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2017 5:08:00 PM
Vijay, Yes, it was a good memory but scary at the time it happened..Thanks for the kind review..I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment...Sara
Date: 8/31/2017 3:59:00 PM
It's a god job you can look back and smile and write an amusing poem but it must have been traumatic at the time:-) hugs jan xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2017 5:00:00 PM
Jan, It was scary at the time that it happened for sure..He went through a stage of wanting to lock doors for some reason..LOL..Thank you for dropping by and reading my work..i appreciate the time spent here..Sara
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