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Trapped

Trapped on this roller coaster, No matter how hard I try to get off, I always end up right back, The ride goes through love, Family, Career, This is an emotio coaster, Trapped cant leave, Can't get off this Emotion Coaster, Dead inside but alive on this Coaster....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 12:47:00 PM
Dang...wow...that's very...true...i love you poems, and the one titled "tears"...keep up the good work...God Bless...-Brittany-
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Date: 3/3/2010 5:01:00 PM
-Dead inside but alive on this Coaster....- interesting, makes me think of your meaning. i like the way you form your poems too. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:48:00 AM
Wow! Ummm not sure what to say to this except...wonderful.
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:41:00 AM
wow i cannot believe that i am your first comment on this one when so many people feel the same! i know i do and i dont see that changing anytime soon. rthis is a great poem.Jo
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