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Transposition

Transposition A human is afflicted Constitutionally impaired Stricken with a penchant For humans inherently despaired On the conscious level Feels sensations of suffering Gleans paramount endearment For their dark proclivity The human radiates benevolence To the inviolable entity Transmitting a vision That life is worth living Furnish with the knowledge That existence must seek balance Those who shine on others The beams reach them too Love begets love Let us walk in their shoes Sunshine Williams

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Julia Ward

Date: 6/24/2015 3:33:00 PM

Much thought, carefully expressed.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 6/25/2015 7:02:00 PM

Thank you Julia, it was my first of this form :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/1/2015 12:49:00 PM

Wow. I love this. "Those who shine on others // The beams reach them too". A truism anywhere you go. The law of nature simply demands it. I admire your mind and heart, Jill. Kim

Jill Spagnola
Date: 6/25/2015 7:05:00 PM

Hi Kim! Thank you sooo much for your special words and heartfelt sentiment. They go deeply appreciated.. :), jill

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2015 1:53:00 PM

back for a second read

Jill Spagnola
Date: 6/25/2015 7:09:00 PM

Thank you very much SKAT, I'm a fan of your work (not just cuz every one else is :)), You welcomed me from the start. I have never really considered myself a poet, now being immersed in beautiful verse, I have never been more inspired to be one, jill

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2015 8:43:00 AM

I like the transportation of every single thought. Life is worth living. Awesome post. ..:):):).. Sk