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Transparent

You try to speak as if you have some kind of depth yet i choke from trying to quench my thirst in such shallow thoughts you open your mouth and deceit spills out you try your best to blend in … when in fact your true colors are transparent… I can see right through you… Go be yourself By yourself… You are the only one who can stand you ~Samantha Raines~

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Skat A

Date: 4/6/2014 6:36:00 AM

Sadie,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2014 2:04:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sadie :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2014 1:23:00 PM

Sadie,, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

John Lawless

Date: 4/5/2014 7:10:00 AM

This is an intriguing poem as it opens doors to many interpretations, always a good thing in my thinking about poetry. Well written and to the point.