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Standing
under
an unjust moon
unable
   to move
from this
lurking mood
   of alone

no shadow
   cast by
this vaporous
form
reflecting nothing
   nothing
but empty
heart drained and
dust
   dry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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August 6, 2009 at 10:51 AM
I am reading my favorite poems today and just wanted to let you know this is still a favorite to me Jill. Love, Carol
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