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transparency egg white runs down clear glass bowl.... dew 'pon daylilies

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Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 10/21/2024 2:21:00 AM

This is a thoughtful haiku. Nicely done Sara. Blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2024 2:56:00 AM

Why, thank you, Mulu. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 10/20/2024 8:37:00 PM

Heterogenous elements are yoked together to create this haiku of depth. Well done Sara...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/21/2024 2:56:00 AM

I like your play on words in your comment. Thanks for the comment. Sara K

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2024 10:10:00 AM

Lovely haiku Sara, best wishes

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/20/2024 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate the visit. Sara K