Transparencies a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

TRANSPARENCIES
multilayered
  transparent
memories
so
personal
  a conscious
blurring
of
 animated
reality

overlooked
feelings
bold
expressive
   style
enhanced
 contrast
with
suffused
in  brilliant
 vivid
   speculation

a controversy
 shows
expressive
 revelation
of
ambiguity
  within

 demonstrated
with
  the loss
&intense
struggle s
sensitively
 depicted

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