Transmutation

Familiar sights, patterned trajectories,
where I was a character in the dream,
responding therein spontaneously, 
ignorant of wherefrom illusions stream,
thus knowing not things are not what they seem,
though lost in trance, wherein stooped was my stance,
took a small step back to witness life’s dance.

The movie continued, though I was still,
my consciousness polarised, so to speak,
witnessing my earth form trudging uphill,
watched by formless presence, humble and meek,
joyous dancing with Cupid cheek to cheek,
wherein mood and mode was celebration,
poised in the vibrant void of cessation.

Desires subsumed, the dream could not resume,
since silence ended the movement of thought,
so with the veil thinned, bliss began to zoom
and with no mind battles in my head fought,
I imbibed wisdom downloads God’s grace brought,
thus recalibrating my heart’s blink rate,
ushering wisdom that defies debate.

It came to pass that I as ego fell,
just as a withered leaf falls off a tree,
a story strange, which yet I dare to tell,
for God then appeared and He set me free,
no load on my chest, roaming earth carefree,
though yet in form, His light in heart aflame,
an epiphany mere words cannot name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 28, 2026 at 8:53 AM
This poem elegantly intertwines themes of self-discovery and enlightenment, weaving a narrative of transformation through vivid imagery and philosophical reflection. The use of metaphors effectively conveys the depth of introspection and transcendence. Good job my friend
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August 28, 2026 at 8:57 AM
Delighted you enjoyed, SP dear, God bless.
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August 28, 2026 at 6:35 AM
What a profound and beautifully executed Rhyme Royal! The steady ABABBCC rhyme scheme provides the perfect meditative rhythm for this spiritual journey of awakening. I especially loved the clear transition from being "lost in trance" to discovering the "vibrant void of cessation." The imagery of the ego quietly falling away, just as a "withered leaf falls off a tree," is incredibly peaceful and resonant. A truly uplifting and masterful write!
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August 28, 2026 at 8:01 AM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Alison, I’m delighted you enjoyed this write, God bless.
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