Transmutation

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Transmutation Poetry Contest N/A

we woke up early one morn, ego shorn it felt as though we were in form reborn nodes within stirred, boundaries blurred our head and heart, with love concurred let me be in the heavens, where bells sound calming energies, can’t hear my heart pound I affirm it is nirvana, here within all knowing reaffirming our love, one that keeps growing a promise kept by me, with all of my devotion quenched and non-discreet, infinite emotion

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 3:49:00 AM

Quite an intriguing and serene take for the 'Transformation' contest, I'm loving these rhymes here which create a mellifluous flow. Your wordplay is spellbinding too.. "I affirm it is nirvana, here within all knowing reaffirming our love, one that keeps growing" This is my favorite part I think, beautifully knitted.. Best of luck for the contest :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/9/2023 8:32:00 AM

A wonderful Rhyme write/picture. Good Luck... Have a wonderful day/weekend.................

Tom Woody

Date: 12/8/2023 3:54:00 PM

Awesome entry for the contest I am Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2023 3:59:00 PM

Awe, thank you, Tommy!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/8/2023 1:02:00 PM

Quite an emotional and articulate composition, Anaya. Outstanding rhymes, overflowing with nuanced creativity...everyone must exercise self-control over their ego; it is our adversary.Best of success with the contest. You possess a linguistic ability that is equally tender and profound.

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 12:53:00 PM

Great rhymes...everyone needs to control their ego...its our nemesis..good luck in the contest.

Silent One
Date: 12/8/2023 1:04:00 PM

No I don't think so..

I Am Anaya
Date: 12/8/2023 12:56:00 PM

Thank you SO! True. I think it's supposed to be a collaboration?