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Transitory Mirror

Transitory Mirror Dark pools look back These eyes Now slow mark their lines Crows feet emotions With sun kind smiles Older now As they stare Their sparkle sheen Hides the so many things Times have come Gone into an Iris of thought The lookouts of my soul Wonder at themselves Behind me Spent seconds of captured light Ricochet in sadness and laughter And draw their features In ideograms of tears To their corners Here where my dreams reside And where my fear can hide Gentle brown they seem now Of one time darkness confiscated And madness rims In their violence no longer becomes The person beneath them But echoes still All the footprints of life Stranger they are to the knowing Recognition reflecting The thronging colours reassemble And presume to know me The lover me The hidden me dips the razor in cold clear water And carries on shaving

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/6/2009 5:19:00 AM
Wow. You are a seriously major poet. Thanks for all those kind comments. Deep and haunting introspection here. Love the whole concept of what is going on in your mind while you are shaving. Heavy duty excellent. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/5/2009 4:58:00 PM
Colin I sense a change in yourself and feelings brought in through visions and retrospects of oneself. Very deep write. I hope all is well with you and spirit.Now we can communicate on this sight. Blessings to you and your son. My father told me to wish you a wonderful new year tolyou and your boy. GBU both Michael
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Date: 1/5/2009 11:03:00 AM
There is a haunting feeling that reflects in this poem...deep and somber. Well done, Colin! ~ Carrie
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