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Watching a snow flake
Melting on my hand I see
Transformation like
That of human souls freed from
The hindrance of mortal flesh

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Caren Krutsinger

December 19, 2018 at 5:09 PM

This is beyond the beyond in a number of ways. A FAV for me.

M. L. Kiser

December 20, 2018 at 2:34 PM

Oh good, thanks so much.

Rhona Mcferran

December 19, 2018 at 10:33 AM

This is amazing and deep... LOVE it! ;)

M. L. Kiser

December 19, 2018 at 12:04 PM

Thank you, I'm glad.

Gershon Wolf

December 18, 2018 at 7:43 PM

Penetrating vision indeed! Wonderful! :) gw

M. L. Kiser

December 19, 2018 at 10:17 AM

Thank you, Gershon.

Funom Makama

December 18, 2018 at 10:30 AM

Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.

M. L. Kiser

December 18, 2018 at 11:35 AM

Wow! That's quite a comment...I'm so glad it made your spirit dance. I hesitated to put it up there today but, I see that I made the right decision. Thanks Funom.