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Watching a snow flake Melting on my hand I see Transformation like That of human souls freed from The hindrance of mortal flesh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/19/2018 5:09:00 PM
This is beyond the beyond in a number of ways. A FAV for me.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/20/2018 2:34:00 PM
Oh good, thanks so much.
Date: 12/19/2018 10:33:00 AM
This is amazing and deep... LOVE it! ;)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/19/2018 12:04:00 PM
Thank you, I'm glad.
Date: 12/18/2018 7:43:00 PM
Penetrating vision indeed! Wonderful! :) gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/19/2018 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon.
Date: 12/18/2018 10:30:00 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/18/2018 11:35:00 AM
Wow! That's quite a comment...I'm so glad it made your spirit dance. I hesitated to put it up there today but, I see that I made the right decision. Thanks Funom.
Date: 12/17/2018 9:29:00 PM
Wow! I just had an "aha moment" reading this, M.L. Great analogy.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/17/2018 9:38:00 PM
Thank you.