Transitioning

Rose up from cloud-base.
Looked around the echoing cave of my skull.

Saw yesterday dancing a gypsy dance with the night.
Saw a little boy looking for his hands,
hands that a mother rarely held.

Sniffed up my nose, hold my breath
until a head grows back again,
at this moment of infinity
it is a deep-thinking cabbage.

Old man snoring
even though his brain is awake
and swimming up toward the light
bones dressed in winter-greens.

Is it time? No, not yet,
it's sun-up
it's once again
bleeding another reason to write
this semi-conscious poem,
a work dedicated
to a shadow pinned to a bare wall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mccann Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 1:05 PM
Profound poem, Eric. Thank you. The gypsy dance, the echoing cave, the cabbage, the sun-up bleeding; it's unbearable. Elizabeth
Ashford Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 4:28 PM
LOL Elizabeth, I am somewhat a master of 'unbearable' poetry. Much thanks.
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