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Transfusion

 TRANSFUSION

I’ve got to see you
It’s an emergency
My heart is bleeding
I have waited too long now
I need a love transfusion


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Copyright © Carole Duet | Year Posted 2017

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January 11, 2018 at 2:02 AM

Oh yes a love transfusion, every now and then one needs it. Another wonderful write. You are on a roll girl. Keep them coming....Maria xxx

January 11, 2018 at 3:24 PM

Hey Maria and thanks. I don't know about it being a "wonderful write" but I'm glad you liked it. Carole :D

December 31, 2017 at 9:55 PM

Awesome, Carole. Really adorable.

December 31, 2017 at 10:26 PM

Well thank you, Line. I'm glad you think so. Carole Duet

December 30, 2017 at 10:36 AM

Oooh... deep tanka..

December 31, 2017 at 10:24 PM

Not too deep ...lol. Carole

December 30, 2017 at 8:46 AM

Carole, we all need a love transfusion from time to time. Best wishes for the new year. John

December 31, 2017 at 10:23 PM

For sure and thanks, John. Happy New Year to you too. Carole Duet

December 29, 2017 at 6:35 PM

Desperation envisioned. You need the love doctor!

December 29, 2017 at 7:28 PM

lol...yes I do, Kim! Do you know a good doc to recommend?

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