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Transfusion

TRANSFUSION I’ve got to see you It’s an emergency My heart is bleeding I have waited too long now I need a love transfusion Tanka form for Rick Parise’s contest

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Maria Williams

Date: 1/11/2018 2:02:00 AM

Oh yes a love transfusion, every now and then one needs it. Another wonderful write. You are on a roll girl. Keep them coming....Maria xxx

Carole Duet
Date: 1/11/2018 3:24:00 PM

Hey Maria and thanks. I don't know about it being a "wonderful write" but I'm glad you liked it. Carole :D

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/31/2017 9:55:00 PM

Awesome, Carole. Really adorable.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 10:26:00 PM

Well thank you, Line. I'm glad you think so. Carole Duet

Silent One

Date: 12/30/2017 10:36:00 AM

Oooh... deep tanka..

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 10:24:00 PM

Not too deep ...lol. Carole

John Gondolf

Date: 12/30/2017 8:46:00 AM

Carole, we all need a love transfusion from time to time. Best wishes for the new year. John

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 10:23:00 PM

For sure and thanks, John. Happy New Year to you too. Carole Duet

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/29/2017 6:35:00 PM

Desperation envisioned. You need the love doctor!

Carole Duet
Date: 12/29/2017 7:28:00 PM

lol...yes I do, Kim! Do you know a good doc to recommend?